Fairy+Tale+Rewrite

The Little Mermaid
There she was combing her hair, as if she didn’t do anything wrong at all. The nerve she had to go to the surface and stare at the humans. It is unthinkable for her to be one of those disgusting creatures. I know just what I’ll do, I will get Sebastion to hang around on her and get her to stop. “Guard bring me Sebastion at once!” as the guard left to get Sebastion I was thinking to myself ‘I am Triton lord of the seven seas! I should be able to tell her what to do and she do it with out question.’ Ariel has to be most hard headed mermaid under the sea, but what would I do without her. She is my daughter, but she should be obedient like her sisters. “Excuse me sire. Did you call for my presence?” he asked in his croaky lobster voice. “Yes I did. You know how stuborn Ariel is, and I want you to try and stop her from going to the surface.” “Yes lord Triton I will do that right away your majesty.” He whispered in a cowardly voice. As Sebastion left I asked myself how he became my advisor, I came up with no answer.  Sebastion returned later that day and told me a surprising story that was not expected at all, but it didn’t chamge a thing. He told me “Your daughter is in love with a human. That is why she goes to the surface evrey day, to stare at him while he works on his ship.” To which I replied “I think she loves what he is not who he is.” “No your sire she loves him.” He said with knowing. “It still doesn’t change a thing Sebastion, che still needs to be stopped from going to the surface!” “Yes your magesty.” And he left to try and complete his task.  I woke up the next day to shouts from the street that Ariel had gone to the surface and not returned. I swamm myself as fast as I could swim to Sebastion’s shack to see if he were there. And what do you know, he was sitting there weeping and his weeping soon turned to urnest sobbing. “Sebastion,” I said “are the rumors true?” “Yes your majesty” he choked out between his sobs. “What happened!?” I boomed “Your not going to like it.” “Just tell me.” “She went to U..U… she went to Ursula.” He broke out in a sob. He went on “She turned he into a human for three days unless she can get her true loves kiss from that man without talking.” “This is horrible!” “If she cant get her kiss Ursula gets her soul!” he broke out into his biggest sob yet. “NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!” The next three days were the longest wait ever. On the third day I went to the surface just in time to see Ariel get her true love’s first kiss. Right then I understood that she did love this man and that she was going to stay with him for the rest of her life. I understood now so I could go back to my home knowing she would be safe at her new home. BOOOOOOM! I saw Ursula rise from the sea and try and take Ariel back. There was a crashing battle and it ended with my triton in her stomach and her sinking to the deepest chasam in the see.